MLDOLQ1+Stella

Mini-Lessons

Daily Oral Language

Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.

DOL 1: NA

DOL 2: NA

DOL 3

Sentence 1: the book the warden is considered among the better of trollopes many novels

Sentence 2: there are several steps necessary to replace a damaged internal modem first eject the modem second deinstall the software then replace the broken one with a new one

DOL 4

Sentence 1: they would of froze during the blizzard but they seen an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the appalachian mountains

FIXED : They froze during the blizzard, but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the Appalachian Mountains.

Sentence 2: lee was wathcing the movie the sixth sense - at least i think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working

FIXED : Lee was wathcing the movie 'The Sixth Sense' - at least I think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working.

DOL 5

Sentence 1: jose rung the bell at the delivery entrance when noone answered he left quickly

FIXED : Jose rung the bell at the delivery entrance; when no one answered, he left quickly.

Sentence 2: i and my brother catched the train at fifty second and beachhaven streets unfortunately, we got off of the train too blocks to soon

FIXED : My brother and I caught the train at Fifty-second and Beachhaven Streets; unfortunately, we got off of the train two blocks too soon.

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because in order to repair youre damaged Motorcycle which is all banged in shell have to do alot of repainting

FIXED : In order to repair your damaged motorcycle which is all banged up, she'll have to do a lot of repainting.

Sentence 2: he could of swam to that reef but its to stormy to try that

FIXED : He could have swam to that reef, but it was too stormy to try that.

DOL 7

Sentence 1: me and my brother weared blue jeans we wasnt admitted to the bigelow restaurant

FIXED : My brother and I wore blue jeans, we weren't admitted to the Biglow Restaurant.

Sentence 2: the young woman drived that there blue car wearing a white scarf

FIXED : The young woman wearing a white scarf drove that blue car.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: because your late finishing the book report youll have to give us girls the books to take to diegos house

FIXED : Because you're late finishing the book report, you'll have to give us girls the books to take to Diego's house.

Sentence 2: my grandfather he dont always have time to call us on our Birthdays but he doe send cards and presents

FIXED : My grandfather doesn't always have time to call us on our birthdays, but he does send cards and presents.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: they wont be going to the west this spring however theyll be going to connecticut

FIXED : They won't be going to the West this spring; however, they'll be going to Connecticut.

Sentence 2: i and my sister have chose to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on-line and send to e-mails

FIXED : My sister and I have chosen to do the following: Start shopping for video games, compare prices on-line, and send two e-mails.

DOL 10

Sentence 1: there car would not start irregardless of what they tried they finally beeped youre friend i think

FIXED : Their car would not start regardless of what they tried; they finally beeped your friend.

Sentence 2: wasnt that a great softball game we seen with colette and liu your friends

FIXED : Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with your friends, Colette and Liu?

DOL 11

Sentence 1: the long poem the lady o fthe lake was wrote by sir walter scott raul said and is considered one of the poets best

FIXED : The long poem, __The Lady of the Lake__, was written by Sir Walter Scott Raul and it is considered one of the poet's best.

Sentence 2: when will you learn me to use this computer maria asked must i ask you i another three months

FIXED : "When will you teach me to use this computer?" asked Maria "Must I ask you in another three months?"

DOL 12

Sentence 1: he has wrote a novel entitled the lonely desert and sold a painting named illuminations

FIXED : He has written a novel entitled __The Lonely Desert__, and sold a painting names __Illuminations__.

Sentence 2: its never fare weather was sang by jess at the concert presented at the heritage building

FIXED : "It's Never Fair Weather" was sung by Jess at the concert presented at the Heritage Building.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: since they may of drank the orange juice but we didnt touch the fruit punch

FIXED : They may have drunk the orange juice, but we didn't touch the fruit punch.

Sentence 2: jamel dont want nothing returned but newsweek and people the 2 magazines that he give to them students

FIXED : Jamel didn't want anything returned except Newsweek and People, the two magazines that he gave to those students.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: shira announced heatedly the better ot them three runners didnt even place in that there marathon

FIXED : Shira announced heatedly the best of the three runners didn't even place in that marathon.

Sentence 2: the oil burner bursted during the morning during the afternoon mom founded a plumber to repair them

FIXED : The oil burner bursting in the morning; during the afternoon, Mom found a plumber to repair it.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: the man who was the one wearing the blue workshirt should of brung his wife and child with he

FIXED : The man wh wore blue work shirt should have brought his wife and child with him.

Sentence 2: the australian aborigine have knowed for a long time what it means to be persecuted dont you think

FIXED : The Australian Aborigine have known for a long time what it means to be persecuted, don't you think?

DOL 16

Sentence 1: The //Spirit of St. Louis// was the plane that Charles Lindbergh flew across the Atlantic.

FIXED : The //Spirit of St.Louis// was the plane that Charles Lindbergh flew across the Atlantic.

Sentence 2: "The Future of the Internet" is the name of an article in this computer magazine, do you want to read it?

FIXED : "The Future of the Internet" is the name of an article in this computer magazine. Do you want to read it?

FIXED :

DOL 17

Sentence 1: 38 customers should of did the following examined the merchandise returned it and they should of wrote a letter of complaint

FIXED : Thirty-eight customers should have done the following: examine the merchandise, return it and write a lettter of complaint.

Sentence 2: dad said you could of raise the window for more air or you could of open the door for more air

FIXED : Dad said "You could have raised the window or opened the door for more air.

DOL 18

Sentence 1: arent their alot of quoted passages in youre short story charise

FIXED : Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your short story, //Charise//?

Sentence 2: the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions the computer doesnt cost them to much

FIXED : Because the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions, the computer didn't cost them too much.

DOL 19

Sentence 1: irregarless of the similarities youve noted the washington post is different than the new york times

FIXED : Regardless of the similarities, you've noted the Washington Post is different from The New Work Times.

Sentence 2: nancy unpacked the software starts the computers and then she loads it

FIXED : Nancy unpacked the software,started the computers, and then loaded it.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: rushing across the street the bluish purple motorcycle almost hit leo

FIXED : Rushing across the street, Leo was almost hit by the bluish-purple motorcycle.

Sentence 2: she has a great photo of the scene anna yelled as she runs to help her sister

FIXED : "She has a great photo of the scene!" Anna yelled as she ran to help her sister.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: greenwich village an area in lower new york is the seting for the short story washington square

FIXED : Greenwich Village, an area in lower New York, is the setting for the short story //"Washington Square".//

Sentence 2: because my mom and dad i think want to travel when us kids are in college

FIXED : My mom and dad, I think, want to travel when we kids are in college.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: the television soap opera guiding light is on to early im still at work when it begin

FIXED : The television soap opera, Guiding Light, is on too early; I'm still at work when it begun.

Sentence 2: shira reckless drived the car into the lot flinged the door open quickly and then she takes her briefcase into the house

FIXED : Shira recklessly drove the car into the lot, flung the door open quickly, and then took her briefcase into the house.

DOL 23

Quiz

DOL 24

Sentence 1: the man who was chosen to be the club president has gave many years of service to the Town of farmingdale

Sentence 2: the invisible ladder is a poetry book that contains the touching selection to dorothy a poem about love