PN+Joon

**Part II: Prewriting (post on your PN wiki page)**

 * Assignment**: Your assignment is to write a narrative about a formative moment in your life that somehow defined who you are (the event changed you or you learned about an important idea). You must include several paragraphs that reflect on how you changed, what did you learned, and WHY is it significant.

Directions: Fill in the information below as completely as possible.

Your purpose is to explain, from your POV, a moment in your life that somehow defined who you are. Be as specific as possible. Focus in on one or two main events that demonstrate the change (or idea learned). What is your specific purpose in this narrative - what change are you demonstrating (or idea learned)?
 * Purpose:**

The sudden knowledge of the delicate beauty and innocence of nature. The purpose is to demonstrate that if we did not care for nature then it will dissapear. It gave me the thought of preserving nature.

Who is your audience?
 * Audience:**

Anyone

In one sentence state the main idea of this story from the 1st person POV. (This is how you changed or what you learned.)
 * Thesis:**

The main idea of the story is that nature must be actively preserved because it can be easily changed and destroyed.

Looks like: Black hair, brown eyes. Age:14 Motivation / Objective: (What do you want?): To have a good time camping.
 * Description of Character** (this is you)

Where does the narrative take place? In Washington state. When does the narrative take place? In 2008. In chronological order, list the main events of the story / narrative. **Hint:** focus your narrative on the key moment where the change occurred. When I went camping my friend and I set up a tent and after a while my friend and I went to sleep. After a while I woke up because of my friend's snoring. I opened the tent flap and I saw a deer standing in the middle of some trees and bushes. It then looked at me dead in the eye and then walked away. I then thought about how people could hunt those types of animals and destroy their homes. That then got me thinking about nature itself and how nature is so similar to a deer: beautiful and fragile.
 * Setting:**
 * Plot:**

What is the major problem in the story that produces the change in you? Describe this conflict in several complete sentences. The conflict I had was a mental battle. The pure nature of the deer told of how easy it could become unbalanced. Are there any key moments in the story where dialogue would be effective? List these moments here. A key moment would be in List any sensory details that will be important in your narrative: sight, smells, sounds, tastes, touch, and movement. sight: The deer walked around with no fear and even though the deer looked me in the eye, it walked away without any fear. How did you change? What did you learn? Why is it significant? It made me more self-aware of nature. This was significant because it helped a lot in finding my side of an argument and creating myself.
 * Conflict:**
 * Dialogue:**
 * Sensory Details:**
 * Reflection / Analysis section**: //(this section is critical)//