SCP+Joon

Satirical Comic Project Proposal Directions: Complete the following questions – short answers are acceptable. Please get approval from Mr. Stephens before beginning your project.

What do you plan to satirize (idea, organization, person, etc.)? credibility of a students side of the story and the corruption in people that are supposed to be looking for the right way to do things, not the easy way out, and unjust punishments.

What is the conﬂict in your story? If someone was sent late to class, then of course they will be tardy and some teachers would not give you a tardy pass. And so the person gets detention. So the problem is not the detention but the horrible feeling of being punished for something you did not do.

Brieﬂy outline the plot events (bullet points okay)… Bob is late because the P.E. teacher had sent him out late and he ran all the way to class though the bell rung when he was just out the door, and no matter how much he told the teacher of his situation, he would not listen and so he got a detention for a no good reason.

Who are the characters? (a limited number is a good idea) Bob: the main character Mr. Pam:Teacher P.E. Teacher

State how you will use the following devices (use at least ﬁve of the seven listed): Allusion:Mr. Pam smiles wikedly at Bob when he said I won't give you too much trouble. (A omen of a obvious bad punishment. Hyperbole (exaggeration):Mr. Pam uses hyperbole of Bob's tardiness. (He says that he came late on purpose because no way could a good student be almost a minute late.) Oxymoron:The P.E. teacher says that you are one of the earliest of the latest, so I will not give you a pass. (So the earliest of the slowest) Irony (sarcasm):P.E. teacher says I am sure you won't be late, though the first bell had already rung and they are on the B3 floor and he has to go to 10th floor. (A sort of ironic statement because the teacher is just too lazy to give him a pass and knows he will be late.) Understatement:When Mr. Pam says I won't get you into too much trouble, he gives him detention.