MLDOLQ1+JaneR

Daily Oral Language

Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.

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DOL 2: NA

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Sentence 1: the book the warden is considered among the better of trollopes many novels (correction for sentence 1) The book, The Warden, is considered among the better of Trollope's many novels

Sentence 2: there are several steps necessary to replace a damaged internal modem first eject the modem second deinstall the software then replace the broken one with a new one (correction for sentence 2) There are several steps neccesary to replace a damaged internal modem: first, eject the modem; second, deinstall the software; then, replace the broken one with a new one.

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Sentence 1: they would of froze during the blizzard but they seen an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the appalachian mountains (correction for sentence 1) They would have frozen during the blizzard, but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off the Appalachian mountains. Sentence 2: lee was wathcing the movie the sixth sense - at least i think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working (correction for sentence 2) Lee was watching the movie __The Sixth Sense__ - at least I think he said that - when the video player stopped working. (correction for sentence 2) I think Lee said he was watching the movie The Sixth Sense when the video player stopped working.

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Sentence 1: josé rung the bell at the delivery entrance when noone answered he left quickly (correction for sentence 1) José rung the bell at the delivery entrance; when no one answered, he left quickly. Sentence 2: i and my brother catched the train at fifty second and beachhaven streets unfortunately, we got off of the train too blocks to soon (correction for sentence 2) My brother and I caught the train at 52nd and Beach Haven Streets;unfortunately, we got off of the train two blocks to soon.

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Sentence 1: because in order to repair youre damaged Motorcycle which is all banged in shell have to do alot of repainting (correction of sentence 1) In order to repair your damaged Motorcycle, which is all banged up, she'll have to do a lot of repainting. Sentence 2: he could of swam to that reef but its to stormy to try that (correction of sentence 2) He could have swum to that reef, but it's too stormy to try that.

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Sentence 1: me and my brother weared blue jeans we wasnt admitted to the bigelow restaurant (correction of sentence 1) My Brother and me wore blue jeans, so we weren't admitted to the Bigelow restaurant. Sentence 2: the young woman drived that there blue car wearing a white scarf (correction of sentence 2) The young woman wearing a white scarf drove that blue car.

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Sentence 1: because your late finishing the book report youll have to give us girls the books to take to diegos house (correction for sentence 1) Because you were late finishing the book report, you'll have to give us girls the books to take to Diego's house. Sentence 2: my grandfather he dont always have time to call us on our Birthdays but he doe send cards and presents (correction for sentence 2) My grandfather doesn't always have time to call us on our birthdays, but he does send cards and presents.

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Sentence 1: they wont be going to the west this spring however theyll be going to connecticut correction for sentence 1) They won't be going to the West this spring; however, they'll be going to Connecticut. Sentence 2: i and my sister have chose to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on-line and send to e-mails correction for sentence 2) My sister and I have chosen to do the following: start shopping for video games, compare prices online, and send emails.

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Sentence 1: there car would not start irregardless of what they tried they finally beeped youre friend i think correction for sentence 1) Their car would not regardless of what they tried, so i think they finally beeped their friend. Sentence 2: wasnt that a great softball game we seen with colette and liu your friends two Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with Colette and Liu, your friends?

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Sentence 1: the long poem the lady o fthe lake was wrote by sir walter scott raul said and is considered one of the poets best correction for sentence 1) The long poem "The Lady of the Lake" was written by Sir Walter Scott, Raul said "and it is considered to be one of the poet's best." Sentence 2: when will you learn me to use this computer maria asked must i ask you i another three months correction for sentence 2) "When will you teach me to use this computer?" Maria asked, "Must I ask you in another three months?"

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Sentence 1: he has wrote a novel entitled the lonely desert and sold a painting named illuminations correction for sentence 1) He has written a novel __The Lonely Desert__ and sold a painting named __Illuminations__. Sentence 2: its never fare weather was sang by jess at the concert presented at the Heritage Building correction for sentence 2) "It's never Fair Weather" was sang by Jess at the concert presented at the Heritage Building.

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Sentence 1: since they may of drank the orange juice but we didnt touch the fruit punch correction for sentence 1) They may have drunk the orange juice, but we didn't touch the fruit punch. Sentence 2: jamel dont want nothing returned but newsweek and people the 2 magazines that he give to them students correction for sentence 2) Jamel didn't want anything returned except for Newsweek and People, the two magazines that he gave to his students.

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Sentence 1: shira announced heatedly the better ot them three runners didnt even place in that there marathon correction for sentence 1) Shira announced heatedly that the better of three runners didn't even place in the marathon. Sentence 2: the oil burner bursted during the morning during the afternoon mom founded a plumber to repair them correction for sentence 2) The oil burner bursted in the morning; in the afternoon, Mom found a plumber to repair it.

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Sentence 1: the man who was the one wearing the blue workshirt should of brung his wife and child with he correction for sentence 1) The man, the one wearing the blue work shirt, should have brought his wife and child with him. Sentence 2: the australian aborigine have knowed for a long time what it means to be persecuted dont you think correction for sentence 2) The Australian Aborigine have known for a long time what it means to be persecuted, don't you think?

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Sentence 1: the spirit of st louis was the plane whom charles lindbergh flies in across the atlantic correction for sentence 1) //The Spirit of St. Louis// was the plane that Charles Lindbergh flew across the Atlantic. Sentence 2: the future of the internet is the name of a article in this Computer magaine do you want to read them correction for sentence 2) "The future of the Internet" is the name of an article in this computer magazine, do you want to read them?

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Sentence 1: 38 customers should of did the following examined the merchandise returned it and they should of wrote a letter of complaint Thirty - eight customers should have done the following: examined the merchandise, returned it, and they should have written a letter of complaint. Sentence 2: dad said you could of raise the window for more air or you could of open the door for more air Dad said, "you could have rose the window for more air or you could have open the door for more air."

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Sentence 1: arent their alot of quoted passages in youre short story charise correction for sentence 1) Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in your short story, Charise? Sentence 2: the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions the computer doesnt cost them to much correction for sentence 2) Because the students had sold many newspaper subscirptions, the computer didn't cost them too much.

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Sentence 1: irregarless of the similarities youve noted the washington post is different than the new york times correction for sentence 1) Regardless of the similarities you've noted, the //Washington Post// is different from //The New York Times//. Sentence 2: nancy unpacked the software starts the computers and then she loads it correction for sentence 2) Nancy unpacked the software, started the computers, and then she loaded them.

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Sentence 1: rushing across the street the bluish purple motorcycle almost hit leo correction for sentence 1) Rushing across the street, Leo was almost hit by the bluish-purple motorcycle. Sentence 2: she has a great photo of the scene anna yelled as she runs to help her sister correction for sentence 2) "She has a great photo of the scene!" Anna yelled as she ran to help her sister.

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Sentence 1: greenwich village an area in lower new york is the seting for the short story washington square correction for sentence 1) Greenwich Village, an area in lower New York, is the setting for the short story "Washington Square." Sentence 2: because my mom and dad i think want to travel when us kids are in college correction for sentence 2) My mom and dad, I think, want to travel when we are in college.

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Sentence 1: the television soap opera guiding light is on to early im still at work when it begin The television soap opera __Guiding Light__ was on early. I'm still at work when it begins. Sentence 2: shira reckless drived the car into the lot flinged the door open quickly and then she takes her briefcase into the house Shira recklessly drove the car into the lot, flung the door open quickly, and then took her briefcase into the house.

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Quiz

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Sentence 1: the man who was chosen to be the club president has gave many years of service to the Town of farmingdale

Sentence 2: the invisible ladder is a poetry book that contains the touching selection to dorothy a poem about love