MLDOLQ1+ChristinaS

Mini-Lessons

Daily Oral Language

Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.


 * DOL 1**: NA


 * DOL 2**: NA


 * DOL 3**

Sentence 1: the book the warden is considered among the better of trollopes many novels

Sentence 2: there are several steps necessary to replace a damaged internal modem first eject the modem second deinstall the software then replace the broken one with a new one


 * DOL 4**

Sentence 1: they would of froze during the blizzard but they seen an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the appalachian mountains -They would have frozen during the blizzard, but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off the Appalachian Mountains.

Sentence 2: lee was wathcing the movie the sixth sense - at least i think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working -Lee was watching the movie, __The Sixth Sense__ - at least I think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working.


 * DOL 5**

Sentence 1: jose rung the bell at the delivery entrance when noone answered he left quickly -Jose rang the bell at the delivery entrance; when no one answered, he left quickly.

Sentence 2: i and my brother catched the train at fifty second and beachhaven streets unfortunately, we got off of the train too blocks to soon -My brother and I caught the train at Fifty-second Beachhaven Streets; unfortunately, we got off the train two blocks too soon.


 * DOL 6**

Sentence 1: because in order to repair youre damaged Motorcycle which is all banged in shell have to do alot of repainting -In order to repair your damaged motorcycle, she'll have to do a lot of repainting.

Sentence 2: he could of swam to that reef but its to stormy to try that -He could have swum to that reef, but it's too stormy to try that.


 * DOL 7**

Sentence 1: me and my brother weared blue jeans we wasnt admitted to the biglow restaurant -Because my brother and I wore blue jeans, we weren't admitted to the Biglow Restaurant.

Sentence 2: the young woman drived that there blue car wearing a white scarf -The young woman wearing a white scarf drove that blue car.


 * DOL 8**

Sentence 1: because your late finishing the book report youll have to give us girls the books to take to diegos house -Because you were late finishing the book report, you'll have to give us girls the books to take to Diego's house.

Sentence 2: my grandfather he dont always have time to call us on our Birthdays but he doe send cards and presents -My grandfather doesn't always have time to call us on our birthdays, but he does send cards and presents.


 * DOL 9**

Sentence 1: they wont be going to the west this spring however theyll be going to connecticut -They won't be going to the West this spring; however, they'll be going to Connecticut.

Sentence 2: i and my sister have chose to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on-line and send to e-mails -My sister and I have chose to do the following: start shopping for video games, compare prices on-line, and send e-mails.


 * DOL 10**

Sentence 1: there car would not start irregardless of what they tried they finally beeped youre friend i think -Their car would not start regardless of what they tried; they finally beeped your friend.

Sentence 2: wasnt that a great softball game we seen with colette and liu your friends -Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with Colette and Liu, your friends?


 * DOL 11**

Sentence 1: the long poem the lady o fthe lake was wrote by sir walter scott raul said and is considered one of the poets best -"The long poem, __The Lady of the Lake__ was written by Sir Walter Scott," Raul said, "and it is considered one of the poet's best."

Sentence 2: when will you learn me to use this computer maria asked must i ask you i another three months -"When will you teach me to use this computer?" Maria asked, "Must I ask you in another three months?"


 * DOL 12**

Sentence 1: he has wrote a novel entitled the lonely desert and sold a painting named illuminations -He has written a novel entitled __The Lonely Desert__ and sold a painting named __Illuminations__.

Sentence 2: its never fare weather was sang by jess at the concert presented at the heritage building -"It's never Fair Weather" was sung by Jess at the concert presented at the Heritage building.


 * DOL 13**

Sentence 1: since they may of drank the orange juice but we didnt touch the fruit punch -They may have drunk the orange juice, but we didn't touch the fruit punch.

Sentence 2: jamel dont want nothing returned but newsweek and people the 2 magazines that he give to them students -Jamel didn't want anything returned except Newsweek and People, the two magazines that he gave to those students.


 * DOL 14**

Sentence 1: shira announced heatedly the better ot them three runners didnt even place in that there marathon -Shira announced heatedly, "The best of the three runners didn't even place in that marathon!"

Sentence 2: the oil burner bursted during the morning during the afternoon mom founded a plumber to repair them -The oil burner burst in the morning; during the afternoon, Mom found a plumber to repair it.


 * DOL 15**

Sentence 1: the man who was the one wearing the blue workshirt should of brung his wife and child with he -The man wearing the blue workshirt should have brought his wife and child with him.

Sentence 2: the australian aborigine have knowed for a long time what it means to be persecuted dont you think -The Australian Aborigine were known for a long time what it means to be persecuted, don't you think?


 * DOL 16**

Sentence 1: the spirit of st louis was the plane whom charles lindbergh flies in across the atlantic -//The Spirit of St. Louis// was the plane that Charles Lindbergh flew across the Atlantic.

Sentence 2: the future of the internet is the name of a article in this Computer magaine do you want to read them -"The Future of the Internet" is the name of an article in this computer magazine. Do you want to read it?


 * DOL 17**

Sentence 1: 38 customers should of did the following examined the merchandise returned it and they should of wrote a letter of complaint -Thirty-eight customers should have done the following: examined the merchandise, returned it, and written a letter of complaint.

Sentence 2: dad said you could of raise the window for more air or you could of open the door for more air -Dad said, "You could have raised the window or opened the door for more air."


 * DOL 18**

Sentence 1: arent their alot of quoted passages in youre short story charise -Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your short story, Charise?

Sentence 2: the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions the computer doesnt cost them to much -Because the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions, the computer didn't cost them too much.


 * DOL 19**

Sentence 1: irregarless of the similarities youve noted the washington post is different than the new york times -Regardless of the similarities you've noted, the //Washington Post// is different from //The// //New York Times//.

Sentence 2: nancy unpacked the software starts the computers and then she loads it -Nany unpacked the software, started the computers, and then loaded them.


 * DOL 20**

Sentence 1: rushing across the street the bluish purple motorcycle almost hit leo -Running across the street, Leo was almost hit by the bluish-purple motorcycle.

Sentence 2: she has a great photo of the scene anna yelled as she runs to help her sister -"She has a great photo of the scene!" Anna yelled as she ran to help her sister.


 * DOL 21**

Sentence 1: greenwich village an area in lower new york is the seting for the short story washington square -Greenwich Village, an area in lower New York, is the setting for the short story "Washington Square."

Sentence 2: because my mom and dad i think want to travel when us kids are in college -My mom and dad, i think, want to travel when us kids are in college.


 * DOL 22**

Sentence 1: the television soap opera guiding light is on to early im still at work when it begin -The television soap opera //Guiding Light// is on too early; I'm still working when it begins.

Sentence 2: shira reckless drived the car into the lot flinged the door open quickly and then she takes her briefcase into the house -Shira recklessly drove the car into the lot, flung the door open quickly, and then took her briefcase into the house.


 * DOL 23**

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