MLDOLQ1+Sally

Daily Oral Language

Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.

DOL 1: NA

DOL 2: NA

DOL 3

Sentence 1: the book the warden is considered among the better of trollopes many novels

Sentence 2: there are several steps necessary to replace a damaged internal modem first eject the modem second deinstall the software then replace the broken one with a new one

DOL 4

Sentence 1: they would of froze during the blizzard but they seen an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the appalachian mountains

fixed: **They would have frozen the blizzard, but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off the Appalachian Mountains.**

Sentence 2: lee was wathcing the movie the sixth sense - at least i think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working

fixed: **Lee was watching the movie 'The Sixth Sense' - at least I think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working.**

DOL 5

Sentence 1: jose rung the bell at the delivery entrance when noone answered he left quickly

Fixed: **Jose rang the bell at the delivery entrance; when no one answered, he left quickly.**

Sentence 2: i and my brother catched the train at fifty second and beachhaven streets unfortunately, we got off of the train too blocks to soon

Fixed: **My brother and I caught the train at fifty seconds and Beachhaven Streets; unfortunately, we got off the train two blocks too soon.**

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because in order to repair youre damaged Motorcycle which is all banged in shell have to do alot of repainting

Fixed: **In order to repair your damaged motorcycle, which is all banged up a she'll have to do a lot of repairing.**

Sentence 2: he could of swam to that reef but its to stormy to try that

Fixed: **He could have swum to that reef, but it's too stormy to try that.**

DOL 7

Sentence 1: me and my brother weared blue jeans we wasnt admitted to the bigelow restaurant

Fixed: **My brother and I wore blue jeans, we weren't admitted to the the Bigelow Restarurant.**

Sentence 2: the young woman drived that there blue car wearing a white scarf

Fixed: **The young woman drove that blue car, wearing a white scarf.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: because your late finishing the book report youll have to give us girls the books to take to diegos house

****Fixed: Because you finished the book report late, you'll have to give the girls the books to take to Diego's house**.


 * Sentence 2: my grandfather he dont always have time to call us on our Birthdays but he doe send cards and presents **


 * Fixed: My grandfather doesn't always have time to call us on our birthdays, but he does send cards, and presents.**


 * DOL 9

Sentence 1: they wont be going to the west this spring however theyll be going to connecticut

****Fixed: They won't be going to the West this spring; however, they'll be going to Connecticut.**


 * Sentence 2: i and my sister have chose to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on-line and send to e-mails **


 * Fixed: My sister and I have chosen to do the following: start shopping for video games, compare prices on-line, and send two emails.**


 * DOL 10

Sentence 1: there car would not start irregardless of what they tried they finally beeped youre friend i think

**Fixed: Their car would not start regardless of what they tried, so I think they finally beeped your friend.


 * Sentence 2: wasnt that a great softball game we seen with colette and liu your friends**

Fixed: Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with Colette, and Liu, your friends?

DOL 11

Sentence 1: the long poem the lady o fthe lake was wrote by sir walter scott raul said and is considered one of the poets best


 * Fixed: "The long poem, The Lady of the Lake was written by Sir Walter Scoot," Raul said, "and it is considered one of the poet's best.**

Sentence 2: when will you learn me to use this computer maria asked must i ask you i another three months


 * Fixed: "When will you teach me to use this computer?" Maria asked. "Must I ask you later in another three months?"**

DOL 12

Sentence 1: he has wrote a novel entitled the lonely desert and sold a painting named illuminations


 * Fixed: He has written a novel entitled,** __**The Lonely Desert**__ **and sold a painting named** __**Illuminations**__**.**

Sentence 2: its never fare weather was sang by jess at the concert presented at the heritage building


 * Fixed:** __**It's Never Fair Weather**__ **was sung by Jess at the concert presented at the Heritage building.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: since they may of drank the orange juice but we didnt touch the fruit punch

****Fixed: They may have drunk the orange juice, but we didn't touch the fruit punch.**

Sentence 2: jamel dont want nothing returned but newsweek and people the 2 magazines that he give to them students **


 * Fixed: Jamel doesn't want anything returned but Newsweek and people, the two magazines that he gave to those students**.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: shira announced heatedly the better ot them three runners didnt even place in that there marathon


 * Fixed: Shira announced heatedly that the best of the three runners didn't even place in that marathon.**


 * Sentence 2: the oil burner bursted during the morning during the afternoon mom founded a plumber to repair them

****Fixed: The oil burner burst in the morning, during the afternoon, Mom found a plumber to repair it.**

DOL 15

Sentence 1: the man who was the one wearing the blue workshirt should of brung his wife and child with he

Sentence 2: the australian aborigine have knowed for a long time what it means to be persecuted dont you think
 * Fixed: The man wearing the blue workshirt should have brought his wife and child with him.**

Fixed: The Australian, Aborigine have known for a long time what it means to be persecuted, don't you think?

DOL 16

Sentence 1: the spirit of st louis was the plane whom charles lindbergh flies in across the atlantic

****Fixed: The Spirit of St. Louis was the plane that Charles Lindbergh flew across the Atlantic.**

Sentence 2: the future of the internet is the name of a article in this Computer magaine do you want to read them


 * Fixed: "The Future of the Internet" is the name of an article in this computer magazine. Do you want to read it?**


 * DOL 17

Sentence 1: 38 customers should of did the following examined the merchandise returned it and they should of wrote a letter of complaint

****Fixed: Thirty-eight customers should have done the following; examined the merchandise, returned it, and written a letter of complaint.**


 * Sentence 2: dad said you could of raise the window for more air or you could of open the door for more air **


 * Fixed: Dad said, "you could have raised the window, or you could have opened the door for more air.**


 * DOL 18

Sentence 1: arent their alot of quoted passages in youre short story charise

****Fixed: "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your short story, Charise?"**


 * Sentence 2: the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions the computer doesnt cost them to much **


 * Fixed: Because the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions, the computer didn't cost them too much.**


 * DOL 19

Sentence 1: irregarless of the similarities youve noted the washington post is different than the new york times **


 * Fixed: Irregardless of the similarities you've noted the** **Washington Post is different than** **the New York Times.**


 * Sentence 2: nancy unpacked the software starts the computers and then she loads it **


 * Fixed: Nancy unpacked the software, started the computers, and then she loaded them.**
 * DOL 20

Sentence 1: rushing across the street the bluish purple motorcycle almost hit leo

Fixed: Rushing across, Leo was almost hit by the bluish purple motorcycle.

Sentence 2: she has a great photo of the scene anna yelled as she runs to help her sister

Fixed: "She has a great photo of the scene" Anna yelled as she ran to help her sister.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: greenwich village an area in lower new york is the seting for the short story washington square

Fixed: Greenwich village, an area in lower New York, is the setting for the short story in "Washington Square."

Sentence 2: because my mom and dad i think want to travel when us kids are in college

Fixed: My mom, and dad, I think, want to travel when we are in college.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: the television soap opera guiding light is on to early im still at work when it begin

Fixed: The television soap opera, __Guiding Light__ is on too early, and I'm still at work when it begins.

Sentence 2: shira reckless drived the car into the lot flinged the door open quickly and then she takes her briefcase into the house

Fixed: Shira recklessly drove the car into the lot, and flung the door open quickly, and then took her briefcase into the house.

DOL 23

Quiz

DOL 24

Sentence 1: the man who was chosen to be the club president has gave many years of service to the Town of farmingdale

Sentence 2: the invisible ladder is a poetry book that contains the touching selection to dorothy a poem about love **