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DOL 4

Sentence 1: they would of froze during the blizzard but they seen an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the appalachian mountains They would have been frozen during the blizzard, but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the Appalachian Mountains.

Sentence 2: lee was wathcing the movie the sixth sense - at least i think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working Lee was watching the movie __The Sixth Sense__ - at least I think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working.

DOL 5

Sentence 1: jose rung the bell at the delivery entrance when noone answered he left quickly Jose rang the bell at the delivery entrance; when no one answered, he left quickly.

Sentence 2: i and my brother catched the train at fifty second and beachhaven streets unfortunately, we got off of the train too blocks to soon My brother and I caught the train at Fifty-second and Beachhaven Streets; unfortunately, we got off of the train two blocks too soon.

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because in order to repair youre damaged Motorcycle which is all banged in shell have to do alot of repainting In order to repair your damaged motorcycle, she'll you have to do a lot of repainting.

Sentence 2: he could of swam to that reef but its to stormy to try that He could have swum to that reef but it's too stormy to try that.

DOL 7

Sentence 1: me and my brother weared blue jeans we wasnt admitted to the bigelow restaurant My brother and I wore blue jeans, so we weren't admitted to the Bigelow restaurant.

Sentence 2: the young woman drived that there blue car wearing a white scarf The young woman drove that blue car while wearing a white scarf.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: because your late finishing the book report youll have to give us girls the books to take to diegos house Because you're late finishing finishing the book report, you'll have to give us girls the books to take to Diego's house. Sentence 2: my grandfather he dont always have time to call us on our Birthdays but he doe send cards and presents My grandfather doesn't always have time to call us on our birthdays, but he does send cards and presents.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: they wont be going to the west this spring however theyll be going to connecticut They won't be going to the West this spring; however, they'll be going to Connecticut. Sentence 2: i and my sister have chose to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on-line and send to e-mails My sister and I have chosen to do the following: start shopping for video games, compare prices online and send e-amils.

DOL 10

Sentence 1: there car would not start irregardless of what they tried they finally beeped youre friend i think Their car would not start regardless of what they tried; I think they finally beeped your friend. Sentence 2: wasnt that a great softball game we seen with colette and liu your friends Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with Colette and Liu, your friends?

DOL 11

Sentence 1: the long poem the lady o fthe lake was wrote by sir walter scott raul said and is considered one of the poets best The long poem The Lady of the Lake was written by Sir Walter Scott," Raul said, "and it is considered one of the poet's best. Sentence 2: when will you learn me to use this computer maria asked must i ask you i another three months "When will you teach me to use this computer?" Maria asked. "Must I ask you another three months later?

DOL 12

Sentence 1: he has wrote a novel entitled the lonely desert and sold a painting named illuminations He has written a novel entitled __The Lonely Desert__ and sold a painting named __Illuminations__. Sentence 2: its never fare weather was sang by jess at the concert presented at the heritage building "It's Never Fair Weather" was sung by Jess at the concert presented in the Heritage Building.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: since they may of drank the orange juice but we didnt touch the fruit punch Since they may have drunken the orange juice, we didn't touch the fruit punch. Sentence 2: jamel dont want nothing returned but newsweek and people the 2 magazines that he give to them students Jamel doesn't want anything returned, but Newsweek and People -

DOL 14

Sentence 1: shira announced heatedly the better ot them three runners didnt even place in that there marathon Shira announced heatedly, "The best of the three runners didn't even place in that marathon." Sentence 2: the oil burner bursted during the morning during the afternoon mom founded a plumber to repair them The oil burner bursted during the morning. During the afternoon, Mom found a plumber to repair it.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: the man who was the one wearing the blue workshirt should of brung his wife and child with he The man wearing the blue workshirt should have brought his wife and child with him. Sentence 2: the australian aborigine have knowed for a long time what it means to be persecuted dont you think The Australian Aborigine have known for a long time what it means to be persecuted, don't you think?

DOL 16

Sentence 1: the spirit of st louis was the plane whom charles lindbergh flies in across the atlantic The Spirit of St. Louis was the plane that Charles Lindbergh flew in across the Atlantic. Sentence 2: the future of the internet is the name of a article in this Computer magaine do you want to read them "The Future of the Internet" is the name of an article in this computer magazine. Do you want to read them?

DOL 17

Sentence 1: 38 customers should of did the following examined the merchandise returned it and they should of wrote a letter of complaint Thirty-eight customers should have done the following: examined the merchandise, returned it, and written a letter of complaint. Sentence 2: dad said you could of raise the window for more air or you could of open the door for more air Dad said, "You could have raised the window or opened the door for more air."

DOL 18

Sentence 1: arent their alot of quoted passages in youre short story charise Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your short story, Charise? Sentence 2: the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions the computer doesnt cost them to much The students had sold many newspaper subscriptions; the computer doesn't cost them too much.

DOL 19

Sentence 1: irregarless of the similarities youve noted the washington post is different than the new york times Regardless of the similarities you've noted, the Washington post is different from the New York Times. Sentence 2: nancy unpacked the software starts the computers and then she loads it Nancy unpacked the software, started the computers, and loaded it.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: rushing across the street the bluish purple motorcycle almost hit leo Rushing across the street, Lao was almost hit by a bluish-motorcycle. Sentence 2: she has a great photo of the scene anna yelled as she runs to help her sister "She has a great photo of the scene," Anna yelled as she ran to help her sister.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: greenwich village an area in lower new york is the seting for the short story washington square Greenwich Village, an area in lower New York, is the setting for the short story "Washington Square." Sentence 2: because my mom and dad i think want to travel when us kids are in college I think my mom and dad want us kids to travel when we are in college.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: the television soap opera guiding light is on to early im still at work when it begin The television soap opera __Guiding Light__ is on too early; I'm still at work when it begins. Sentence 2: shira reckless drived the car into the lot flinged the door open quickly and then she takes her briefcase into the house Shira recklessly drove the car into the lot, flung the door open quickly, and took her briefcase into the house.

DOL 23

Quiz

DOL 24

Sentence 1: the man who was chosen to be the club president has gave many years of service to the Town of farmingdale

Sentence 2: the invisible ladder is a poetry book that contains the touching selection to dorothy a poem about love