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DOL 4

Sentence 1: they would of froze during the blizzard but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the appalachian mountains


 * //They would have frozen during the blizzard; but they've seen an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming from the Appalachian Mountains.//**

Sentence 2: lee was wathcing the movie the sixth sense - at least i think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working


 * //Lee was watching the movie,//** **//The Sixth Sense//** **//- I think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working.//**

DOL 5

Sentence 1: jose rung the bell at the delivery entrance when noone answered he left quickly


 * //José rang the bell at the delivery entrance. When no one answered, he left quickly.//**

Sentence 2: i and my brother catched the train at fifty second and beachhaven streets unfortunately, we got off of the train too blocks to soon


 * //My brother and I brother caught the train at fifty - second Beachhaven Streets, but unfortunately, we got off of the train two blocks early. (or too soon)//**

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because in order to repair youre damaged Motorcycle which is all banged in shell have to do alot of repainting

//**In order to repair your damaged motorcycle which is all banged up, she'll have to do a lot of repainting.**//

Sentence 2: he could of swam to that reef but its to stormy to try that


 * //He could've swum to that reef. But, it's too stormy to try.//**

DOL 7

Sentence 1: me and my brother weared blue jeans we wasnt admitted to the bigelow restaurant


 * //My brother and I wore blue jeans so we weren't admitted to the Bigelow Restaurant.//**

Sentence 2: the young woman drived that there blue car wearing a white scarf


 * //The young woman wearing a white scarf drove the blue car.//**

DOL 8

Sentence 1: because your late finishing the book report youll have to give us girls the books to take to diegos house


 * //Because you're late finishing the book report, you'll have to give us girls' the books to take to Diego's house.//**

Sentence 2: my grandfather be dont always have time to call us on our Birthdays but he does send cards and presents


 * //My grandfather doesn't s have time to call us on our birthdays, but he does send cards and presents.//**

DOL 9

Sentence 1: they wont be going to the west this spring however theyll be going to connecticut


 * //They won't be going to the West this spring. However, they'll be going to Connecticut.//**

Sentence 2: i and my sister have chose to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on-line and send to e-mails


 * //My sister and I have chose to do the following: start shopping for video games, compare prices on-line and send two e-mails.//**

DOL 10

Sentence 1: there car would not start irregardless of what they tried they finally beeped youre friend i think


 * //I think their car wouldn't start regardless of what they tried so they finally called their/your friend.//**

Sentence 2: wasnt that a great softball game we seen with colette and liv your friends


 * //Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with Colette, Liv, and your friends?//**

DOL 11

Sentence 1: the long poem the lady of the lake was wrote by sir walter scott raul and is considered one of the poets best


 * //A long poem, __The Lady of the Lake__, was written by Sir Walter Scott, "Raul said, and is considered one of the poet's best."//**

Sentence 2: when will you learn me to use this computer maria asked must i ask you in another three months


 * //"When will you teach me how to use computer?" Maria asked. "Must I ask you in another three months?"//**

DOL 12

Sentence 1: he has wrote a novel entitled the lonely desert and sold a painting named illuminations


 * //He has written a novel entitled __The Lonely Deserts__ and sold a painting named __Illuminations.__//**

Sentence 2: its never fare weather was sang by jess at the concert presented at the heritage building


 * //"It's Never Fair Weather," was sung by Jess at the concert presented in the Heritage Building.//**

DOL 13

Sentence 1: They may have drunk the orange juice, but we didnt touch the fruit punch.

Sentence 2: Jamel didn't want anything returned except Newsweek and People, the two magazines that he gave to those students.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: Shira announced heatedly; The better of the three runners didnt even place in the marathon.

Sentence 2: The oil burner bursted during the morning. During the afternoon, Mom found a plumber to repair it.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: The man who was wearing the blue work shirt brought his wife and child with him.

Sentence 2: The Australian aborigine have known what it means to be persecuted for a long time, don't you think?

DOL 16

Sentence 1: the spirit of st louis was the plane whom charles lindbergh flies in across the atlantic


 * //The Spirit of St. Louis was the plane in which Charles Lindbergh flew across the Atlantic.//**

Sentence 2: the future of the internet is the name of a article in this Computer magaizne do you want to read them


 * //"The Future of the Internet" is the name of a article in this computer magazine. Would you like to read it?//**

DOL 17

Sentence 1: Thirty-eight customers should have done the following: examined the merchandise, returned it, and written a letter of complaint.

Sentence 2: Dad said, "You could raise the window or you could open the door for more air."

DOL 18

Sentence 1: Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your short story, Charise?

Sentence 2: Because the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions, the computer didn't cost them too much.

DOL 19

Sentence 1: Regardless of the similarities you've noted, the __Washington Post__ is different than the __New York Times__.

Sentence 2: Nancy unpacked the software, started the computers, and then loaded them.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: Rushing across the street, the bluish-purple motorcycle almost hit Leo.

Sentence 2: "She has a great photo of the scene!" Anna yelled as she ran to help her sister.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: greenwich village an area in lower new york is the seting for the short story washington square

**//Greenwich village, an area in lower New York, is the setting for the short story "Washington Square."//**

Sentence 2: because my mom and dad i think want to travel when us kids are in college

**//My mom and dad, I think, want to travel when we are in college.//**

DOL 22

Sentence 1: the television soap opera guiding light is on to early im still at work when it begin

Sentence 2: shira reckless drived the car into the lot flinged the door open quickly and then she takes her briefcase into the house

DOL 23

Quiz

DOL 24

DOL 25

Sentence 1: The man who was chosen to be the club president was given many years of service to the Town of Farmingdale.

Sentence 2: //The Invisible Ladder// is a poetry book that contain touching selections to Dorothy a poem about love.