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Sentence 1: the book the warden is considered among the better of trollopes many novels

Sentence 2: there are several steps necessary to replace a damaged internal modem first eject the modem second deinstall the software then replace the broken one with a new one

DOL 4

Sentence 1: they would of frozen during the blizzard but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the Appalachian mountains

Revised:They would've froze during the blizzard, but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds that came off the Appalachian Mountains.

Sentence 2: lee was watching the movie the sixth sense - at least i think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working

Revised: Lee was watching the movie __The Sixth Sense__ - at least I think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working.

DOL 5

Sentence 1: Jose rung the bell at the delivery entrance; when no one answered, he left quickly.

Sentence 2: My brother and I caught the train at Fifty-second street and Beachhaven street; unfortunately, we got off of the train two blocks too soon.

DOL 6

Sentence 1: In order to repair your damaged motorcycle, which is all banged up, she'll have to do a lot of repainting.

Sentence 2: He could have swum to that reef, but it is too stormy to do that. (Past Progressive)

DOL 7

Sentence 1: My brother and I wore blue jeans, as we weren't admitted to the Bigelow Restaurant.

Sentence 2: The young woman was wearing a white scarf drove the blue car.

DOL 8

Sentence 1: Because you were late finishing the book report, you'll have to give the books to us so that we can take them to Diego's house. Sentence 2:My grandfather does not always have time to call us on our birthdays, but he sends cards and presents.

DOL 9

Sentence 1: They won't be going to the West this spring; however they'll be going to Connecticut. Sentence 2: My sister and my I have chosen to do the following when shopping for video games: to compare prices on-line and send two emails.

DOL 10

Sentence 1: Their car would not start regardless of what they tried, they finally beeped their friend.

Sentence 2: Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with Colette, Liu, and your friends.

DOL 11

Sentence 1: The long poem __The Lady of The Lake__ was written by Sir Walter Scott, "Raul said", and is considered one of the best poets.

Sentence 2: When will you teach me how to use this computer? Maria asked, must i ask you in another three months.

DOL 12

Sentence 1: He has written a novel entitled: __The Lonely Desert__ and sold a painting named __Illuminations__.

Sentence 2: Its "Never Fare Weather" was sung by Jess at the concert presented at the Heritage Building.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: They may have of drunk the orange juice, but we didn't touch the fruit punch.

Sentence 2: Jamel does not want anything returned except Newsweek and People, the two magazines that he gave to those students.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: Shira announced heatedly, the best of the three runners didn't even place in that marathon.

Sentence 2: The oil burner burst in the morning; during the afternoon, Mom founded a plumber to repair it.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: The man wearing the blue worksshirt should have brought his wife and child with him.

Sentence 2: The Australian Aborigine have known for a long time what it means to be persecuted, don't you think ?

DOL 16

Sentence 1: The Spirit of St.Louis, was the plane which Charles Lindbergh flew across the Atlantic.

Sentence 2: "The Future of the Internet" is the name of an article this Computer, - magazine. Do you want to read it?

DOL 17

Sentence 1: 38 customers should've done the following: examined the merchandise and returned it, and written a letter of complaint.

Sentence 2: Dad said you could've of raised the window, or you could've of opened the door for more air.

DOL 18

Sentence 1: Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your short story Charise. Sentence 2: The students had sold many newspaper subscriptions; the computer didn't cost them too much.

DOL 19

Sentence 1: Regardless of similarities,you've noted, the __Washington Post__ is different from the New York Times.

Sentence 2: Nancy unpacked the software, started the computers, and she loaded them.

DOL 20

Sentence 1: Rushing across the street, Leo was almost hit by the bluish-purple motorcycle.

Sentence 2: "She has a great photo of the scene" Anna yelled as she ran to help her sister.

DOL 21

Sentence 1: //Greenitch Village// is an area in lower New York, is the setting for the "short story" //Washington Square//.

Sentence 2: I think my mom and dad think we want to travel when we are in college.

DOL 22

Sentence 1: The television soap opera "Guiding Light" is on too early, as I'm still at work when it begins.

Sentence 2: Shira recklessly drove the car into the lot, flung the door open quickly, and then took her briefcase into the house.

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