MLDOLQ1+RachelS

Daily Oral Language

Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.

DOL 1: NA

DOL 2: NA

DOL 3

Sentence 1: the book the warden is considered among the better of trollopes many novels

Sentence 2: there are several steps necessary to replace a damaged internal modem first eject the modem second deinstall the software then replace the broken one with a new one

DOL 4

Sentence 1: they would of froze during the blizzard but they seen an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off of the appalachian mountains
 * They would have frozen during the blizzard, but they saw an empty house that protected them from the biting winds coming off the Appalachian Mountains.**

Sentence 2: lee was wathcing the movie the sixth sense - at least i think he said that - when the DVD player stopped working
 * Lee was watching the movie, //The Sixth Sense//--at least I think he said that--when the DVD player stopped working.**

DOL 5

Sentence 1: jose rung the bell at the delivery entrance when noone answered he left quickly
 * Jose rang the bell at the delivery entrance; when no one answered, he left quickly.**

Sentence 2: i and my brother catched the train at fifty second and beachhaven streets unfortunately, we got off of the train too blocks to soon
 * My brother and I caught the train at Fifty-seconds and Beachhaven Streets; unfortunately, we got off the train two blocks too soon.**

DOL 6

Sentence 1: because in order to repair youre damaged Motorcycle which is all banged in shell have to do alot of repainting
 * In order to repair your damaged motorcycle, which is all banged up, she'll have to do a lot of repainting.**

Sentence 2: he could of swam to that reef but its to stormy to try that
 * He could have swum to that reef, but it's too stormy to try that.**

DOL 7

Sentence 1: me and my brother weared blue jeans we wasnt admitted to the bigelow restaurant
 * Because my brother and I wore blue jeans, we weren't permitted to the Bigelow Restaurant.**

Sentence 2: the young woman drived that there blue car wearing a white scarf
 * The young woman wearing a white scarf drove the blue car there.**

DOL 8

Sentence 1: because your late finishing the book report youll have to give us girls the books to take to diegos house
 * Because you're late finishing the book report, you'll have to give us girls the books to take to Diego's house.**

Sentence 2: my grandfather he dont always have time to call us on our Birthdays but he doe send cards and presents
 * My grandfather doesn't always have time to call us on our birthdays, but he does send cards and presents.**

DOL 9

Sentence 1: they wont be going to the west this spring however theyll be going to connecticut
 * They won't be going to the West this spring; however, they'll be going to Connecticut.**

Sentence 2: i and my sister have chose to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on-line and send to e-mails
 * My sister and I haven chosen to do the following**: **start shopping for video games, compare prices on-line and send e-mails.**

DOL 10

Sentence 1: there car would not start irregardless of what they tried they finally beeped youre friend i think
 * Their car would not start; regardless of what they tried, so they finally beeped their friends.**

Sentence 2: wasnt that a great softball game we seen with colette and liu your friends
 * Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with Colette and Liu, your friends?**

DOL 11

Sentence 1: the long poem the lady o fthe lake was wrote by sir walter scott raul said and is considered one of the poets best
 * "The long poem, __The Lady of the Lake__ was written by Sir Walter Scott," Raul said "and it is considered one of the poet's best.**"

Sentence 2: when will you learn me to use this computer maria asked must i ask you i another three months
 * "When will you teach me to use this computer?" Maria asked, "Must I ask you another three months?"**

DOL 12

Sentence 1: he has wrote a novel entitled the lonely desert and sold a painting named illuminations
 * He has written a novel entitled, "The Lonely Desert" and sold a painting named "Illuminations."**

Sentence 2: its never fare weather was sang by jess at the concert presented at the heritage building
 * "It's Never Fair Weather" was sung by Jess at the concert presented at the heritage building.**

DOL 13

Sentence 1: since they may of drank the orange juice but we didnt touch the fruit punch
 * They may have drunk the orange juice, but we didn't touch the fruit punch.**

Sentence 2: jamel dont want nothing returned but newsweek and people the 2 magazines that he give to them students
 * Jamel doesn't want anything returned, but //Newsweek// and //People//, the two magazines that he gave to those students.**

DOL 14

Sentence 1: shira announced heatedly the better ot them three runners didnt even place in that there marathon
 * Shira announced heatedly, the best of the three runners didn't even place in their marathon.**

Sentence 2: the oil burner bursted during the morning during the afternoon mom founded a plumber to repair them
 * The oil burner burst during the morning; In the afternoon, Mom found plumber to repair it.**

DOL 15

Sentence 1: the man who was the one wearing the blue workshirt should of brung his wife and child with he
 * The man who was wearing the blue work-shirt should have brought his wife and child with him.**

Sentence 2: the australian aborigine have knowed for a long time what it means to be persecuted dont you think
 * The Australian Aborigine have known for a long time what it means to be persecuted, don't you think?**

DOL 16

Sentence 1: the spirit of st louis was the plane whom charles lindbergh flies in across the atlantic
 * The Spirit of St. Louis was the plane where Charles Lindbergh flew across the atlantic.**

Sentence 2: the future of the internet is the name of a article in this Computer magaine do you want to read them
 * "The Future of the Internet" is the name of an article on this computer magazine. Do you want to read it?**

DOL 17

Sentence 1: 38 customers should of did the following examined the merchandise returned it and they should of wrote a letter of complaint
 * Thirty-eight customers should have done the following: examined the merchandise, returned it, and they should have written a letter of complaint.**

Sentence 2: dad said you could of raise the window for more air or you could of open the door for more air
 * Dad said, "You could have raised the window or opened the door for more air."**

DOL 18

Sentence 1: arent their alot of quoted passages in youre short story charise
 * Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your short story, Charise?**

Sentence 2: the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions the computer doesnt cost them to much
 * Because the students had sold many newspaper subscriptions, the computer didn't cost them too much.**

DOL 19

Sentence 1: irregarless of the similarities youve noted the washington post is different than the new york times
 * Regardless of the similarities you've noted, the Washington Post is different from the New York Times.**

Sentence 2: nancy unpacked the software starts the computers and then she loads it
 * Nancy unpacked the software, started the computers, and then she loaded them.**

DOL 20

Sentence 1: rushing across the street the bluish purple motorcycle almost hit leo
 * Rushing across the street, Leo was almost hit by** **the bluish-purple motorcycle.**

Sentence 2: she has a great photo of the scene anna yelled as she runs to help her sister
 * "She has a great photo of the scene!" Anna yelled as she ran to help her sister.**

DOL 21

Sentence 1: greenwich village an area in lower new york is the seting for the short story washington square
 * Greenwich Village, an area in lower New York, is the setting for the short story, "Washington Square."**

Sentence 2: because my mom and dad i think want to travel when us kids are in college
 * My mom and dad, I think, want to travel when we kids are in college.**

DOL 22

Sentence 1: the television soap opera guiding light is on to early im still at work when it begin

Sentence 2: shira reckless drived the car into the lot flinged the door open quickly and then she takes her briefcase into the house

DOL 23

Quiz

DOL 24

Sentence 1: the man who was chosen to be the club president has gave many years of service to the Town of farmingdale

Sentence 2: the invisible ladder is a poetry book that contains the touching selection to dorothy a poem about love