MLDOLQ1+Jonathan

//__because in order to repair youre damaged Motorcycle which is all banged in shell have to do a lot of repairing__//

Because in order to repair your damaged motorcycle, which is all banged in, she'll have to do a lot of repairing.

//__he could have swam to that reef but its too stormy to do that__//

He could have swam to that reef, but its too stormy to do that.

__//me and my brother weared blue jeans we wasnt admitted to the biglow restaurant//__

Me and my brother wore blue jeans; we weren't admitted to the Biglow restaurant.

__//the young woman drived that there blue car wearing a white scarf//__

The young woman drove that blue car there wearing a white scarf.

__//because your late finishing the book report youll have to give us girls the book to take diegos house//__

Because you're late finishing the book report, you'll have to give us girls the books to take to Diego's house.

//__my grandfather he dont have time to call us on our Birthdays but he does send cards and presents__

My grandfather; he does't have time to call us on our birthdays, but he does send cards and presents

//__they wont be going to the west this spring however theyll be going to connecticut__//

They won't be going to the West this spring, however they'll be going to Connecticut.

__//i and my sister have chose to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on-line and send to e-mails//__

My sister and I have chosen to do the following start shopping for video games compare prices on line, and send two emails.

__//there car would not start irregardless of what they tried they finally beeped youre friend i think//__

Their car would not start regardless of what they tried, so they finally beeped their friend.

__//wasnt that a great softball game we seen with colette and liu your friends//__

Wasn't that a great softball game we saw with Colette and Liu, your friends?

__//the long poem the lady o fthe lake was wrote by sir walter scott raul said and is considered one of the poets best//__

The long poem, //The Lady of the Lake, was written by Sir Walter Scott, "Raul said who is considered one of the poet's best."//

__//when will you learn me to use this computer maria asked must i ask you i another three months//__

"When will you teach me how to use this computer?" Maria asked "Must I ask you in another three months?"

//__he has wrote a novel entitled the lonely desert and sold a painting named illuminations__//

He wrote a novel entitled //The Lonely Desert// and sold a painting named //Illuminations.//

__//its never fare weather was sang by jess at the concert presented at the heritage building//__

"It's Never Fair Weather" was sung by Jess at the concert presented at the Heritage Building.

DOL 13

Sentence 1: since they may of drank the orange juice but we didnt touch the fruit punch

They may have drunk the orange juice, but we didn't touch the fruit punch.

Sentence 2: jamel dont want nothing returned but newsweek and people the 2 magazines that he give to them students

Jamel didn't want anything returned but Newsweek people, the two magazines that he gave to those students.

DOL 14

Sentence 1: shira announced heatedly the better ot them three runners didnt even place in that there marathon

Shira announced heatedly, "The better of those three runners didn't even place in that marathon."

Sentence 2: the oil burner bursted during the morning during the afternoon mom founded a plumber to repair them

The oil burner burst in the morning; during the afternoon, mom found a plumber to repair it.

DOL 15

Sentence 1: the man who was the one wearing the blue workshirt should of brung his wife and child with he

The man who was wearing a blue work shirt should have brought his wife and child with him.

Sentence 2: the australian aborigine have knowed for a long time what it means to be persecuted dont you think

Don't you think that the Australian Aborigine have known for a long time what it meant to be persecuted?

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